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Post by ellimist22 on Feb 28, 2009 17:50:11 GMT -5
i dont know what to talk about... so you guys (and girls  ) gimme a subject |
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Post by Laura* on Feb 28, 2009 17:52:53 GMT -5
How 'bout Yeerks? Which is the WHOLE TOPIC OF THIS WEBSITE!
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Post by Angel on Mar 1, 2009 9:48:10 GMT -5
Nah thats too boring. How bout our favorite Books? Who wants to hear a preview of my latest book? (im still working on it)  |
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Post by ellimist22 on Mar 1, 2009 11:06:02 GMT -5
Okay. Mine is...ANIMORPHS?!?!?!
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Post by ellimist22 on Mar 1, 2009 11:06:51 GMT -5
I agree with both of you...
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Post by Laura* on Mar 1, 2009 11:34:11 GMT -5
I'd like to hear it I love Maximum Ride. |
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Post by Theprotector on Mar 1, 2009 17:01:16 GMT -5
The darkness.
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Post by Angel on Mar 2, 2009 9:22:56 GMT -5
Prologue
I ran through the meadow until my parents calls were like whispers, and faded away. I think my parents worry too much. Why don’t they just relax a little? So what that we’re wolfs? It doesn’t matter! I knew I was going to get in trouble when I got back from the river, but I was thirsty! So oh well about the trouble.
I finally reached the river and I began to lap when I heard a click behind me. My head snapped around and I stared at a human just the way my father described them. Hidden behind bushes, strange heads with green tops, multi color fur, tan, green, and orange, and eyes as black as death.
I stared at the black stick he held for a moment before bolting. I ran in a zigzag, which is probably why I am not dead. I heard a bam and then a sharp pain on my ear but I kept running. I reached the den. The very empty den.
"Mom?” I whimpered "Dad?"
No answer. The only sound was the ringing in my ears. I saw a broken piece of glass and walked over to it. My ear. There was a hole the shape of a heart on my ear. I whimpered again and watched as booted feet stopped outside of the den. My heart nearly stopped beating thinking they found me but he moved on.
After I was sure they were all gone I crawled out. I looked into the small meadow and I felt as if time itself had stopped. I saw my father. He was lying on his side, fur stained with blood. Unmoving. I saw a human come and carry him away but I didn’t move. Could this really be happening?
My father dead, my mother gone, and me... Alone?
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Post by ellimist22 on Mar 2, 2009 13:39:14 GMT -5
WOW that is really good
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Post by ellimist22 on Mar 2, 2009 13:49:06 GMT -5
i have a poem called the Labyrinth:
The labyrinth wanders,
It stretches,
It saunters,
With all the inhabitants yelling for me,
For I am the person who made what's out yonder,
And everyone in it is not very free.
The labyrinth entraps,
Ensnares,
And snaps.
With all the inhabitants screaming at me,
For I made this maze; it does not have a map,
And everyone in it is not very free.
Every time they try, doubt
Stops a man from getting out.
The labyrinth releases
A few when it pleases,
The other inhabitants pleading to me,
And nobody in it shall ever be free.
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Post by Theprotector on Mar 4, 2009 21:22:53 GMT -5
The impaled road closes in on the sun. Soon there shall be none of it left. I look around to find father. "Father?" I said. Where is he? I wondered "Father!" I shouted. Nothing. I began to panic. Did the road get him? I searched for Mother. She was in the field. "Wheres Father" I said "In the house"
"Ok" I said. A sharp pain in the ribs made me stagger. An spike. The saruno's! I tried to run away. They got another in my stomach. I started to feel weary. So this is how im going to die. He thought. Then everything went black.
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Post by ellimist22 on Mar 6, 2009 21:15:08 GMT -5
What I Have to say:
".....................Wow."
AWESOME!!
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Post by Theprotector on Mar 6, 2009 22:46:38 GMT -5
He woke up dry and pale. The saruno's were eyeing him oddly. He took out his knive he wasnt supposed to even have but was greatful he disobeyed father. He swung wildly and cut one. The saruno jabbed at him with its many spiked fingers. He dodged and cut the sauno in half. Guts went everywhere. He decided to use this as a distraction. He ran. Finnaly he got away. The only problem now is, he's alone with no one to guide him back.
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Post by ellimist22 on Mar 7, 2009 10:52:32 GMT -5
What is a saruno?
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Post by Theprotector on Mar 7, 2009 14:10:35 GMT -5
a dark evil creature that has claws for hands that shoot out spikes, not very ugly.
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) gimme a subject
